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Monday, November 14, 2011

The Insiders

Authors Note~ This is what on chapter might look like if  a Soc was narrating "The Insiders"

Chapter One
 The sun was hot beating against my skin while standing on the corner of Hickory Way. Yet I was not alone of course. I had my gang. We were top dog and we all knew that, we could do whatever we want and get away with it. Me and my boys ran this town and everyone new it even the Greasers.  Those no good little miss fits. Always causing trouble around here. Those little grubs with nothing to do.  Those Greasers are like the bruised apples on the ground by an apple tree getting  kicked around all day.  Then there's us Socs the ripe apples on the way top, no on can touch us. Our big brother Bob who happened to be my blood related brother was the leader of our group. He was strong willed and always lead our fights to victory. He was the best brother ever he could lead. He thought me all about being a great leader all the essentials I may need. I knew everything he knew I examined carefully every gang fight we were a part of. I never knew that my knowledge of being a leader would ever get me the name so soon. But that little pest, Ponyboy and his friend had killed my brother. If they are smart they will never show there faces around this town again. Knowing I am now in charge of the Socs plus  I am good at planning revenge. These Greasers wont stand a chance.

2 comments:

  1. This is such a great piece of writing! It is very informative and says a lot about the Socs. It could be a little longer but that's okay.

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  2. I loved the ending it's really strong.

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