Authors Note~Retelling piece on my independent reading book. "The Boy's Next Door"
Lori lives for summer, especially this one. This is the summer that the hottie neighbor boy, Sean is going to fall in love with her. She can’t resist revealing her ploy on getting Sean to the “baby” Vader brother Adam, her best friend. There was only one issue Lori was always one of the guys. Now she must change. But now she might be getting all the right attention from the wrong guy.
- I liked your word choive.
ReplyDelete- I don't have much for you to improve on because its really good.
-I thought you did really good at pulling the reader in and comvinceing them to read the book. I know I want to now!!(: